Writing in role

Today we arrived at the island am worried that we have a lack of resources and this is very bad we don't have water we lost our boat which had all the stuff we needed to be honest i don't know what to do and i always know what to do hmm?. we haven't even made shelter and that's one of the most important things the past few weeks i've been freezing and can't bare the feeling of being cold i feel like a animal on the loose everyone says that am worrying to much but it seems like i'm the only one that cares and the others only want to have fun and be disrespectful i hope everyone realises that am speaking sense for goodness sake ughhhhh. and ps am very scared.     

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